Today in my blog I will be reviewing some of my peers' camera transition videos and commenting on what they should have done, as well as what they had done fantastically.
First up, we have Davin's three videos, consisting of a whip pan, match cut, and smash cut. Beginning with the match cut, Davin, a 7 foot football NFL player, soon to be in the NHS club, is studying for his test on transitions with a low angle facing down towards himself to capture how vulnerable he really is. However, the camera tilts upward to reveal the he is really just watching football irresponsibly, remember that he is a tall NFL player, unlike a small human being like Randall Smith who is several inches smaller than him. However, because of Davin's judgement, he ends up doing poorly on the test. A match cut is shown from his house to him taking the test, but this is where I do need to criticize him on his work. Instead of Davin looking at the TV and then using the match cut, he should have shown himself looking at his desk, then match cut to him looking at his test on the desk in class. Overall, 10/10 for acting and story plot, but 7/10 for camera angles.
Secondly, we have his smash cut which has such impeccable acting from both the Davinator and a surprise appearance from the world famous actor, Lazaro Alfonso. All I have to say for this video are positive things. From start to finish I was kept on the edge of my seat. Firstly, the two marvelous actors walk up the stairs, discussing how they did on the quiz. Next thing you know, a sudden smash cut to Davin's test, where we see his score up and center. The DRAMA, the TENSION. Davinator had failed his test, such amazing sound choices as well for this scene. I would give this scene 10/10 for angles and camera work, but that is overshadowed by the immense talent, giving an acting score of 10000/10.
Last but not least, the whip pan. Such amazing camera work with the movement, with such a smooth transition between the scenes. First, we have Davin Williams the third (not really he is the only one) giving his all in this monologue. The camera whips to his bed, where we see a defeated Davin crying on his sheets. I will not live, I shed a saddened tear onto my laptop as I watched our protagonist endure this endless pain, but I believed, truly, in my heart that he would bounce back. All in all, Davin you score a 100000/10 for acting, but I do feel that the camera was too close to your body with the first camera shot. However, the whip pan was executed perfectly, with no cuts visible.
Next up, we have the spectacular Rebecca with such potential for movie production.
Starting with her dissolve cut, wow, what amazing editing skills that rivals that of even Davin. And remarkably, she is several inches taller than Randy. Her dissolve was quick and effective, having one image overlap with another. I was stunned by how smoothly this one done, I have much to learn from her talent.
Moving along, Rebecca implements the use of an iris movement to signify the end of her video. With one swift motion of the iris closing in, we have the use of a comedic effect in play, as well as being used with such a scene that truly brings a tear to my eye. The iris conveyed the friendship between the actors, and Rebecca was able to really pick out the details that she wanted in her video. Well done!
Finally, her best video, in my opinion, would be her match cut. This was accomplished with such technique that I had not realized until a few seconds after the switch. The actors, angles, and camera were positioned so well that it looked like one continuous clip, I thoroughly enjoyed every action packed second of it, and hope her career skyrockets into movie making.
Davin and Rebecca both created amazing clips that have inspired me to improve on my own clips, and I am glad to have received this great opportunity to review their videos. I hope I could do this again for future projects, but for now, I am signing off. Thank you for reading!